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"Out of Bobby"

 

Muhammad Faizal                                                                                                                                               FLM151

 

"Out of Bobby"


Bobby is eating a McSpicy Double while watching a show about explosions. We see him tearing several packets of chili and slurping Milo. We are then taken inside his head, where we see people in an computer lab-like setting. The Big Boss is walking past a row of workers, each controlling a specific body part. Haniel is moving joysticks to move the hands, while Johnny is punching in numbers to move the jaw up and down to chew the food. Ernest is keeping an eye on a weather-chart like graphic, making sure the levels are stable. He is shocked by the Boss reprimanding him, and makes Bobby let loose a fart.

After the meal, Bobby starts to feel funny and heads for the bathroom. The rest of the workers decide to go on a break since they don't need to do much work while Bobby is on the toilet. Ernest asks if one of them could help him get some coffee, but they shut the door before he finishes speaking. Ernest works for a few hours, clicking and typing furiously to operate the anus properly so as not to over strain it. He calls the other workers back once he's done before falling asleep at his desk. He is awakened by the rest who come in, laughing after having a good time outside. They berate Ernest for sleeping on the job, guide Bobby back to bed, and all head out.

The next day, the boss comes down and gathers the workers around to congratulate those who made yesterday possible. Ernest was waiting for his turn to be thanked, but it never came. Nina, for walking Bobby to the bathroom, Haniel, washing up after Bobby, and Irene, who let him see his way to and from the bathroom.  The boss treats the ones he thanked to lunch and they all head out, Ernest still stunned that no one acknowledged his efforts. Irene asks if everyone is there and someone replies that nobody is in the office. They don't notice that Ernest was left behind, sulking.

Ernest, highly peeved, walks towards his desk and takes out a pink form and begins writing. The header "resignation form" appears at the top. He packs up his belongings in a box and heads out, smiling as he leaves. Nobody notices that he left. Meanwhile, Bobby eats a lot of constipating food while playing games. Ernest is at home, bored, trying to figure out what to do with his new found freedom. This scene would play out as a montage.

 

Ernest calls up the office to ask Collin, in charge of the large intestine, how he the office is doing since he left. Collin instead says that he’ll be late with the paperwork for today’s bowel movement, so Ernest would have to work overtime again. Ernest then informed him that he has already submitted his resignation. Suddenly, the chin boss barges in, angered that an employee is missing. Collin hangs up and Ernest is dismayed when his colleagues don’t even realize that he’s gone. He heads out of his house.

 

As the boss is scolding everyone, the whole room starts shaking. The hands, feet and stomach are out of control. Bobby is on the toilet but nothing is coming out. The boss fiddles around with Ernest's computer and an error sound plays. We see Bobby's face in pain, and see a graphic on the computer displaying a graphic that shows that Bobby is now bleeding. The boss asks somebody to find Ernest, and Irene is on it. She comes across his location through his twitter account.

They head to the bladder, which is visually a sunset at the beach, where a very detached Ernest is there, drawing circles in the sand. The boss tries to threaten him to come back, but is cut off by Irene, who tells him to look around. The bladder was much more flooded than it used to be. Ernest argues that no one cares that he’s gone, but Irene chimes in that the whole body would fall apart if it weren't for him, and that everyone needs him. He looks up and asks them if it’s true. They sarcastically reply "yes!" and "you're the best!" He realizes what he has done by quitting and agrees to come back to work. They cheer him on as they run back to his desk.

He arrives at the office, and we see him punching in numbers while we cut to Bobby on the toilet. Tense faces all around as the loading bar progresses. Ernest dramatically presses a button and Overture 1812 plays as Bobby finally releases his dump. Everybody celebrates; workers are high-fiving, hugging and popping champagne. The boss thanks Ernest for his hard work. Ernest then asks for a raise, but the boss responds by shouting “NO!”, effectively killing the mood.

 

 

Runtime: 5 min

Plot Outline
Little people are actually in charge of Bobby's various body parts. Within this community, the workers holding glamorous positions, such as controlling the eyes or the hands, are highly regarded. One of the workers, Ernest, is outcasted by his colleagues, as he was unfortunately tasked with operating the anus. One night, after an over-indulgence of spicy food, Bobby suffers from severe diarrhea. Ernest is forced to work overtime and nobody gives him any appreciation for it the next day. He decides to quit. The rest of the workers realize how important he is when Bobby is unable to pass motion. The workers beg Ernest to come back, and he returns after being appreciated at his post.

Structure

Gap: Ernest feels under appreciated at his workplace.
Desire: Ernest wants to feel important.
Inciting Incident: Ernest has to work overtime when Bobby has diarrhea.
Complication: He does most of the work, but nobody acknowledges him so he decides to quit.
Crisis: Bobby cannot pass motion and his body starts deteriorating, as only Ernest knows how to control the anus.
Climax: The workers appeal to Ernest to come back.
Resolution: Ernest comes back to work after receiving the appreciation he craves.

Aims
Highlight the importance of group cooperation, that every one plays a part
Identify the parts of the body and personify them

Possible Problems
Need a lot of cast members
Comedic elements might not appeal to everyone.
Too long.

Other details
Shot like "The Office" and using POV shots for the "Bobby" view

 

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